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Post by DJS on Jun 25, 2010 5:29:41 GMT -5
We come back from a main event hype video to the announcer’s desk. Sanction: Ladies and gentlemen, I don’t know what’s going on... but Jack Hazard and Jack Sabbath are already in the ring for their match. No entrance or nothing. Let’s find out what they have to say... The camera cuts to Sabbath, with Amy Taylor and Hazard, with Natasha Young, in the ring, both men wearing their entrance attire. Sabbath is hounded with the usual boos, whereas Hazard is receiving an unusually mixed reaction (mostly a bad one from the ones who check on the backstage news). Sabbath places his hand on Hazard’s shoulder.Jack: This man right here, singlehandedly saved The Legion. This man took up my offer from long ago and joined us. Those who weren’t aware aren’t happy. Any noise in the arena is drowned out by the boos. Jack: Oh, do stop booing. The only reason you people boo is because you are too stupid to realise we’re the future and you can’t understand it. Anyway... I say he saved The Legion. No. He didn’t save it. It is reborn. Jack Hazard and I have brought a new era to XWA. Ciaren, Hunter, Chris...they can do what they want. They are not part of us anymore. They never realy were. Hazard is the first true member, something that will b celebrated. Trust me, this will be a moment to remember. The fans boo, but in a more...confused way. Jack pulls out a wide grin, knowing he's left them in temporary suspenceJack: The era of The NEW Legion begins here. With a New Legion, comes many more new things. Give me a chair. Jack walks over to the fearful crew member who hands him the chair, which he sets up in the middle of the ring. Jack: This is the first of many. You Jack Hazard, you are the first of many. You know what’s coming... Are you ready? Hazard takes a moment to prepare himself.Hazard: Yeah, let’s do this. Jack: Good, let's get cracking then! Please, sit and raise your right hand. Hazard sits down and raises his right hand.Jack: Now, with your index finger and your thumb, make and L shape. Hazard does so. Jack looks on grinning like a lunatic whilst the arena look on in confusion. Jack: Now, repeat after me. Jack takes a pause, taking a long, deep breath before continuing. He knows what he’s doing here, and he wants to savour the moment.Jack: I renounce XWA and all its rules. Hazard: I renounce XWA and all its rules. Jack: I renounce all friends, they are inferior. Hazard obediently repeats. Jack: I renounce all family, The Legion is my family. Hazard again repeats.Jack: I renounce all religion, The Legion is my guide. Hazard once again repeats.Jack: I pledge myself to The Legion, and its cause. Hazard: I pledge myself to The Legion, and its cause. Jack: We are The Legion and we are many! As Jack says this, The New Legion’s theme kicks in, AFI’s Miseria CantareThe crowd look on in shock. One of their favourite superstars has joined Jack Sabbath. Despite this, most still stick by him, cheering him on. The same can’t be said for Sabbath however, who is still despised. Jack loves this though, and sucks it all in. After a few lines of “Love your hate, your faith lost, you are now one of us”, the song goes quiet. Jack: Excellent! Welcome to The Legion...Brother Hazard. But that was the beginning, get ready for part two of the initiation. Amy; like we planned... Amy rolls her eyes and reluctantly leaves the ring then searches under the rope. After shuffling around a bit, she pulls out a rope and slides it into the ring, before once again looking under, this time bringing out a steaming bucket with a rod sticking out of it. She heads back into the ring and places the bucket next to Hazard. Jack: Hazard, remove your shirt and put your hands behind the chair. He does so, and Amy ties him to the chair, tight enough for him to be unable to break free. Natasha is starting to get worried, she too knows what is coming, but knows she can’t do anything to stop it. Jack walks over to the bucket, smiling, and pulls out the rod, revealing it to be a large branding iron. The crowd gasp, all fearing the worst. Jack: This is your reward Jack. Without a moment’s hesitation, Jack steps to the side and pushes the branding iron into Hazard’s chest. Hazard lets out a large painful scream. Every member of the audience can feel the pain themselves. The majority of them recoiling in horror, covering their eyes, some however are too shocked to look away. Natasha too is recoiling, looking away from the agony her man is feeling. Amy holds the chair down to battle Hazard’s wild agonizing lunges.Amy (in Hazard’s ear): I’m so sorry. I told him not to but he wouldn’t listen. Hazard: HOLY FUCK! Jack (Shouting): Mouth shut Amy! This is his rechristening! Nobody in the building can come to terms with what is happening. This act has even shocked the usually dismissive John Pain. Pain: What the fuck! This is fucking crazy! Someone has to stop this! Nobody is stopping this. This is Jack Sabbath we’re on about, Jack Sabbath holding a scalding branding iron. Nobody plans to help. Hazard, however, seems to want this. His screams of agony start to disappear, instead he soaks it all in and the resilience he is known for shines through. Jack pulls the iron away, and the camera zooms in to Hazard’s chest to reveal the following. Jack: You are now one of us. Amy unties Hazard and he stands up clutching the burning region of his chest. Somehow, he manages to shrug off all the pain and begins to warm up for his match. Natasha runs over to check up on him, and he assures her he’s fine.Sanction: You have got to be kidding me. He’s going to compete after that?! Pain: Okay, maybe I was wrong about him. This kid has some balls. Jack Sabbath celebrates Hazard’s initiation with him, patting him on the back amongst other things. He then removes the chair from the ring and hands the microphone to the same fearful crew member that handed him the chair earlier. The Legion theme kicks back in again as The New Legion await their first opponents.
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Post by Hazard on Jun 25, 2010 5:37:01 GMT -5
The ceremony within the ring having ended and Misery Cantare fading out, the lights slowly dim to a few, and those left on turn a brilliant shade of crimson as Behind the Mask by Anarchy Club starts to play and the big screen goes completely blank. The lights flicker with every backbeat of the song, and as it progresses into the singing, the curtain can be seen parting by itself and a dark figure slowly walks into view, looking down at the ground as he paces. Although the two men in the ring are very confident individuals within themselves, they both seem visibly shaken. Amy and Natasha both do not stay anywhere close to the ramp side of the ring, both looking terrified.Pain: Oh man, here he is. The man that took out two others with one hit apiece! The man that seemingly took out Sabbath for Rose, although we're not quite sure why... Sanction: We're not sure why he does anything, Pain! The man's not said a word since randomly showing up! The man known only as Nightmare stops a few steps out onto the upper stage area and raises his head to look at the ring where his opponent remain, and as he bring his head up bloodstreams begins slowly crawling down the screen behind him. Through the streams, the people in attendance can see clips of this vicious yet unexplainable phenomenon making quick work of both Chris Chaos and Jack Mercy as well as clips of him slowly walking away from the ring after the Rose/DJS incident. As the screen becomes mostly covered in blood, Nightmare begins pacing to the ring again and the screen fades out again, only pulsating on and off with the backbeat, the same as the lights.Sanction: How much money do we waste on these entrances? This could amount to a raise for me! Pain: They don't give slackers like you raises, Sanction. Sanction: You're the slacker! Pain: Says the guy drowning in vodka every night...  As Nightmare reaches ringside, both Jacks hop out of the ring on the other side, and Nightmare slowly makes his way up the steel steps leading to the apron. Strangely though, his entrance is cut short as his music quickly switches to No Mercy by Jim Johnson and all the lights come back on with a green hue to them. Nightmare turns and looks back at the entrance ramp, a clearly irritated look on his painted face. Nightmare turns back and finishes his walk into the ring as Jack Mercy quickly makes his way out from the back looking thrilled to have a partner such as the one he does.Pain: Something tells me that was NOT a smart move on his behalf, Sanction... Sanction: You're probably right about this one, Nightmare does not look happy at all! Pain: Let's see how this turns out. Jack Mercy rushes to the ring, slapping hands and teasing some fans on the way. He reaches the steps and runs up them before he notices he has a very angry Nightmare glaring at him from the ring. Jack Mercy manages to stop himself from getting in the ring and stays back on the top step, hands out asking for an alliance, at least for now, and Nightmare seems to let go the blatant disrespect and turns back around to face the opposite corner where Hazard and Sabbath have found the courage to get in the ring. Sabbath and Hazard both discuss something for a moment, the Sabbath steps out of the ring and onto the apron outside the ropes. Hazard bounces up and down a couple of times, clearly feeling the after effects of the extremely painful brand.Pain: Not nearly as bad as I expected. Sanction: I doubt this is where this is going to end between those two, but for now they're on the same team. Pain: Will they get along even now? The music dissipates and the lights resume regular white shine as Tommy Tickles signals for the bell to ring, signifying this match is underway. Nightmare slowly walks toward Hazard and Jack, not one to back down, walks up to Nightmare and goes chest to chest with him. Hazard talks a little trash, but receives no reciprocation from his opponent. Noticing there is no reaction from Nightmare, Jack Hazard pulls his fist back and throws a punch into Nightmare's face. Nightmare flinches a bit from the impact, but looks back at Hazard very quickly. Sabbath and Hazard both look baffled by that outcome and Sabbath urges Hazard to try it againSanction: Nightmare seems completely unphased! Pain: Nightmare doesn't even seem real... Sanction: I know what you mean. Pain: He's a real person, he has to be. What will it take to hurt this guy? Hazard pulls back to swing at Nightmare again, but Nightmare quickly throws his own punch that cleanly connects in the bullseye Sabbath was so kind to give. Hazard drops immediately clutching his chest and screaming in agony. Nightmare smirks and walks over to Hazard, grabbing his hair and pulling him to his feet as Jack has both arms over his chest. Hazard quickly pulls one arm off of it and throws a punch that once again connects, but this time to the chest of Nightmare and seemingly having no effect on him. Nightmare grabs Hazard by the throat and walks him backwards into a neutral corner, Tickles following and making sure this is not a choking attack. Hazard flails at Nightmare, but after a minute of flailing, he seems to give up on that tactic and Nightmare grabs his arm.Pain: Hazard doesn't even know what to do! Sanction: Nightmare is just dominating! He's got to have some weakness! Pain: I don't know... He may just not feel anything... Nightmare pulls on Hazards arm and hurls him across the ring at the other corne, and Hazard hits the corner so hard he flips over the turnbuckle and out of the ring, tumbling to the mat below and quickly covering his back and chest, both on fire at the moment. He writhes for a moment, and in that moment Nightmare walks over to and through the ropes near Hazard. Hazard pulls himself up onto his knees. Nightmare grabs his arm and pulls him back to his feet once more, and then pulls on his arm again attempting to Irish Whip Hazard again, but Hazard holds his ground and attempts to reverse the whip onto Nightmare. However, Nightmare quickly reverses his weight and yanks Hazard back into the ring post sending him careening off onto the floor.Sanction: Wow! What an irish whip! Nightmare grabs the ropes and pulls himself up onto the apron, then into the ring. Sabbath, now feeling safe enough to come close, hops off and rushes over to Hazard, quickly checking him over before rolling him into the ring and back to his aggressor. But for all the advantage the shady character inside the ring may have, he does nothing with it and allows Hazard to recollect himself, much to the delight of Sabbath and the ire of Jack Mercy.Pain: What is he doing?! Nightmare was just all over him and then he relented! Mercy begins screaming into the ring at his partner for the night. However, Nightmare seemingly ignores all his yelling and pleading for a tag and as Hazard gathers himself to a vertical base, he pushes his head up with his left hand and throws an elbow into Hazards face, followed by two more. Nightmare loads up for a big right hand, but Hazard ducks underneath and rushes off the ropes nearest Mercy and back at Nightmare, leaping and connecting with a dropkick to Nightmare's head. As sturdy as Nightmare seemed earlier, this kick knocks him backwards into the ropes.Sanction: OH! Look at that, Nightmare actually recoiled from something! Pain: Maybe he really is mortal! Hazard is energized by the first sign of mortality from what seemed to be an unreal being, and he quickly hustles to take advantage. Hazard runs at Nightmare as he pushes himself off of the ropes and steps up Nightmare's torso connecting with a swift enziguiri rattling his brains but not knocking him down. Hazard is a little surprised but not deterred by this and he quickly recovers and unleashes yet another enziguiri on Nightmare.Pain: Look at that punishment being dealt from Hazard to the head of Nightmare! Sanction: Jack has to be careful! Nightmare seems very dangerous but Jack's got him reeling for now! Nightmare wobbles a bit and finally, after all these attacks, falls to one knee and holds his head. Hazard jumps to his feet and gives an excited fist pump at his attacks finally coming to fruition. Hazard rushes over to the ropes and jumps up them without even stepping on any of them, quickly turning around. Nightmare slowly makes his way back to his feet and turns around, and as he makes that fated turn Hazard launches himself onto Nightmare's head and slams him down in a double knee attack!Pain: What the hell! Sanction: And the mighty have fallen! That scrawny runt managed to get'em down! Hazard quickly transitions into a pinning predicament but is shoved off quickly by Nightmare as he sits up and holds his head. Hazard gets up to his knees and stands up, kicking Nightmare as the bigger man gets to his feet. Jack shakes his head in disbelief of the attacks not even phasing his opponent, and he goes off the ropes once again, but this time as he leaps in for a big cross body, Nightmare ducks and catches Hazard on his shoulders and drops backwards, smashing Hazard under his weight in a samoan drop!Pain: Oooohhhhh... One big move and Hazard has hit rock bottom again... Sanction: And right on that brand he got earlier too! That's gotta be extremely painful! Hazard clutches his chest again, not only from the drop but also because it was once again an attack on the fresh brand. Nightmare stands up, though still clearly wobbly, and lifts Hazard up a little. Nightmare rolls Hazard onto his hands and knees and steps back a few paces, then rushes forward and kicks Hazard over onto his own corner, where Sabbath is waiting for Hazard. Nightmare attempts to follow his prey but Sabbath pulls back and unloads a solid right into Nightmare's nose and he steps back a bit, falling to one knee and checking his face for blood.Sanction: I tell you what Pain, that was the first strike I've seen that's really affected that freak! Pain: Something tells me he's beginning to wear down a bit. Sabbath tags himself in on a downed Hazard and quickly steps into the ring and begins raining blows on the head and neck area of Nightmare. Sabbath's blows seem not to hinder Nightmare's ascention to his feet but Sabbath keeps attacking. Sabbath is clearly getting irritated and decides the best way to get a reaction is to hit a big move instead of strikes. He goes around Nightmare and locks in a waist lock clearly indicating something German...Sanction: Sabbath locking his arms, now he's just got to pop his hips and Nightmare will be on his back! Pain: I don't think that's going to happen, Sanction. Sanction: What makes you say that? Nightmare quickly pulls both himself and Sabbath to the ropes and grabs onto them for dear life as Sabbath tugs on Nightmare trying to land a German Suplex to Nightmare's already-worked head. Nightmare refuses to let go and Tickles intervenes with the dreaded 5 count, forcing Sabbath to let go of Nightmare. Sabbath backs off a few steps and Nightmare turns around, but as he does, Sabbath aims a Bicycle kick at his head. Nightmare ducks out of the way and the only damage done by Sabbath in that transaction are to his unborn children as he racks himself on the top rope!Pain: Right on the testi- Sanction: Yeah we know, Pain. You don't have to say what they are. Pain: Good dodging there by Nightmare though, that would've definitely rung his bell! Sabbath gingerly helps himself off of the ropes and checks out his boys as Nightmare stalks his victim from a few feet away. Hazard has recovered enough to stand by the ropes and he yells out to Sabbath to beware of what's behind him. Sabbath turns around and rushes at Nightmare hoping to catch him off guard but Nightmare is ready for him and gives him a reason to reconsider coming out tonight when he grabs a hold of his hair and drills Sabbath with a Head Case!Pain and Sanction: HOLY SHIT! Pain: What a maneuver there by the face-painted freak! Sanction: Sabbath just ate Nightmare's knee at high speed! After the attack Sabbath lands near his own corner and Nightmare stands back up, steadier than before although still checking his head just in case. Mercy is going berzerk wanting to be tagged in, but Nightmare ignores his pleas and heads over to Sabbath, but Sabbath was a lot fresher than Hazard and still has enough energy to tag Hazard back into the match. Nightmare backs up a few steps into the middle of the ring and taunts Hazard by trying to wave him back into the ring. Hazard steps in and Nightmare backs up a little bit, getting ready for round two with the enigma when-SLAPJack Mercy blind-tags Nightmare on the back and quickly makes his way into the ring. Nightmare glares at Mercy for a few moments and at the urging of Tommy Tickles, Nightmare makes his way out of the ring. Problem is, that's not all he makes his way out of. Nightmare doesn't stop on the apron, he slowly steps down the stairs and begins walking up the entrance ramp and out of the area, much to the chagrin of the fans as they begin to boo very loudly.Pain: Okay, what the hell just happened? Sanction: I have no idea, Pain. For some reason, Jack Mercy decided he wanted in and Nightmare...well, I guess Nightmare got sick of his partner's idiotic actions! Pain: Jack Mercy just wanted a piece of the action, that's all! No need to abandon him like that! Not noticing this act from Nightmare, Mercy looks back trying to find his partner only to see him walking away from the match and out of the arena. Mercy looks completely dumbfounded and all at once, he feels the pressure of the two-on-one match he just tagged himself into and it is visibly clear the wind that was in his sails was reduced to Tommy-Boy-esque complete emptiness as he turns around to face the music.
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Post by Hazard on Jun 25, 2010 5:37:28 GMT -5
After the desertion of his partner, Mercy backs into the corner as the referee directs Hazard to stay back as he asks if Mercy wants to continue. Mercy picks himself up and walks up towards Hazard, intent on continuing what was started. The pair engage in a staredown. Hazard surprises him by leaping up and catching him in a hurricanrana, rolling into a pin. One!
Two!Mercy kicks out. The pair switfly regain their footing and Hazard once again goes on the offensive, backing Mercy into the corner. Hazard, the human highlight reel, shows off by backflipping, before charging into Mercy and hitting a stiff shining wizard. Sanction: I really don’t know where Hazard finds the energy to do this stuff, not after the torture he just went through. Hazard releases the shining wizard and Mercy falls perfectly into position, and Hazard notices this. He climbs the turnbuckle and the crowd go insane! They know what’s coming. In a moment of weakness, Hazard milks the crowd. A big mistake as Mercy is able to find enough in him to push Hazard off the top, falling out of the ring and disturbingly landing backfirst on to the steel steps.Sanction: Oh my god. Mercy collapses back onto the mat as Hazard lays burned out on top of the steps. The referee begins to count Hazard out as Mercy struggles to his feet. One!
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Four!For a second, Mercy manages to stand up, but he falls back to his knees, derived of any energy. Hazard has just managed a movement as he slowly rolls off the steps.Five!
Six!Sabbath begins to get anxious. So much so that he jumps from the apron and hurridly walks over to Hazard as the count reaches seven, picking him up and encouraging him to continue. Sabbath slaps him on the back and rolls him back into the ring just before the 10 count. By now, Mercy has regained his footing, and is ready and waiting for Hazard as he is rolled over to him. He picks up Hazard’s near broken body and lifts him high into a military press position, proceeding to slam Hazard chest first onto his knee, landing directly on the brand, the impact forcing Hazard to bounce high off the knee and landing on his back, writhing in agony. Mercy locks the inside leg. One!
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Th...Somehow, Hazard kicks out! Mercy cannot believe it, but he does not allow this to get to him. He stays calm and calculated, picking Hazard up and backing him into the corner. He delivers a few right hands before hitting a burst of sickening knife edge chops directly to the brand. Mercy slows the shots down hitting huge hard chops, continuing to concentrate on the chest. Hazard’s chest is being destroyed by Mercy. After a few more hard chops, he takes Hazard out of the turnbuckle, pulling him into a powerbomb position turning to the centre of the ring and slamming Hazard down with the Mercy Drive. Mercy goes for the cover.One!
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Thr...Hazard kicks out! The crowd roar.
Sanction: How the hell did he manage to kick out of that, that’s insane! Pain: I told you he was good... Mercy cannot believe it. Head in his hands, unable to understand how Hazard has kicked out of his finisher. Hazard somehow manages to turn over and begins to gradually crawl towards Sabbath for the tag. He is unsuccessful as Mercy manages to grab his right leg and lift himself to his feet. Still holding on to Hazard’s leg, he tries to pull him back. Hazard does what he can to stop being pulled back, struggling to keep balance. Hopping on one leg, he finds enough in him to jump up and catch Mercy with a rolling kick to the face, following through with a forward roll on the mat and leaping over to Sabbath getting the tag. Sanction: What!!! I really don’t know where Hazard gets this energy from. Any other wrestler would be falling to bits after this punishment. Sabbath enters the ring and pounds Mercy to the floor, punch after punch after punch, followed by a series of heavy stomps to the face. Mercy turns onto all fours and gets hit with a massive kick to the gut. Mercy is being overpowered by Sabbath in every way possible. Size, strength and most importantly stamina. Sabbath pulls Mercy into the centre of the ring as Amy, almost routinely, jumps to the apron to distract the ref. Sabbath turns Mercy onto his front and grabs his hair, pounding his face into the mat repeatedly. Slam after slam after slam directly to one side of Mercy’s face, painting a portrait of rage on his face. Amy jumps from the apron and the ref turns back to the action. Sabbath stops the continuous beating so he doesn’t risk disqualification, but kneels over Mercy, pulling back Mercy’s head to reveal to the crowd his blood-soaked face and bust nose. One!Sanction: This one’s over Two!Pain: What a way to end it. Thr....Mercy unbelievably kicks out!Sanction/Pain: WHAT?! The insane show of courage is set aside as Sabbath, frustrated, punts Mercy’s head with a vicious kick. Completely broken in the middle of the ring, Jack lifts the lifeless body of Mercy off the floor and sets him up between his legs. He signals for the end as he hoists Mercy high into the air and slams him back down with the first powerbomb of the devastating ‘Diamond’s Wrath’. Sanction: Does he really need to do this, come on, the match is won! Pain: Stop complaining. Jack locks the arms and pulls him back up to deliver the second vicious bomb. Again, he pulls Mercy back up into position, showing his great strength by walking over to Hazard with Mercy still held high. He tags Hazard in and delivers the third brutal powerbomb.
Sanction: Wait a minute, Hazard’s going up top! You have got to be kidding me! The kid’s suffered being thrown into the ring post, a huge fall to the outside, AND a brand! Yet he’s still going for the Hazard’s Way! He doesn’t have to do this! The ring post, the fall, the brand. All the pain. None of this matters right now. The cheers return, the crowd are back on his side. The adrenaline courses through Hazard as he turns and soars through the air.  Hazard slams down on Mercy and the pain is evident as he rolls over and hooks the leg for the pin. One!
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Sanction: What a... different... match. First a brand, then a partner desertion, then a brilliant display of courage from Mercy, all topped off by Hazard’s unbelievable resilience. You have to hand it to Mercy though, he fought on even though his partner left him. Same goes for Hazard fighting on after the brand! Pain: I don’t like to admit that I’m wrong, but this time I have to. Fair play to the guy. He’s good. The crowd are still on their feet, getting behind the New Legion. Hazard goes to help Mercy up, but as he lifts him to his feet, Hazard is met with a hand on his other shoulder. He turns his head to see Sabbath shaking his head in disapprovement. Sabbath whispers into his ear and Hazard lets go of Mercy, who falls to his knees. He takes a step back whilst Sabbath turns away with the same lunatic grin that he had during the brand. The grin turns to a sadistic laugh as Hazard takes Mercy’s head of with a devastating buzzsaw kick.
The crowd go silent with what they are witnessing. Hazard looks down on Mercy with a look of self-disbelief as if he can’t get his head around what he’s just done. Sabbath turns back round and puts his hand back on Hazard’s shoulder, this time with great approval, bringing a smile to Hazard. Jack goes on to demand a microphone, a move that is met with enough boos to fill the Titanic. He is not amused. Sabbath: QUIET! The silence returns.
Sabbath: Thankyou. I don’t think you can hear me, Mercy. But you impressed me tonight. You put up a gallant effort.... Hand me my jacket. Sabbath orders the referee to get his jacket.
Sabbath: I have something for you Jack. The ref brings Sabbath’s coat into the ring and hands it to him. Sabbath puts it on and reaches into the inside pocket, pulling out a letter.
Sabbath: Give this a read, and let me know when you can move. Sabbath lays the letter on Mercy’s chest. He signals for Hazard, Amy and Natasha to leave the ring as the EMT’s rush in. As they walk up the ramp, the New Legion music plays and the EMT’s begin to brace Mercy up and put him on a stretcher. [Fade out]
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Post by Hazard on Jun 26, 2010 3:48:28 GMT -5
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Post by Johawn on Jun 26, 2010 5:11:29 GMT -5
Excellent. Dan was granted a little extra time this week, on the condition that Hazard posted his part as a show of good faith, and even then he was only a couple hours wait, so appreciate his efforts. I already know every tiny bit of Hazard's part, 'cos I was trying to write mine while he was jabbering on about his  There's a lot going on, but successfully so. The new Legion got themselves over as a slick, well oiled, fucking BRUTAL machine. Dan, this wasn't your best work, but I still can't fault it at all. It's well written and effective, getting Nightmare over as this unfeeling monster. This is intriguing stuff, and I'm eager to see him in competition. Everyone played a part here, and everyone played it well. You pulled together and wrote a fun match with an extraordinary amount of build up and intrigue. I think Massacre's going to be all about Nightmare, Jack Hazard, and Jack Sabbath. And this makes me a happy reader ;D WINNER: Legion. There's no voting to do, but I would encourage everyone to leave feedback. People still busted their balls to get their matches in and deserve encouragement and criticism. S'all about helping each other |
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Post by Dan on Jun 26, 2010 13:02:55 GMT -5
Dan, this wasn't your best work, but I still can't fault it at all. It's well written and effective, getting Nightmare over as this unfeeling monster. This is intriguing stuff, and I'm eager to see him in competition. Yeah, I was kind of pushing 2:30ish AM, and I was extremely tired so I just kind of put the ommentary in and said screw it. I think it isn't that great, but the point is gotten across. Sorry Haz...  |
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Post by Hazard on Jun 26, 2010 13:41:58 GMT -5
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Post by Johawn on Jun 26, 2010 14:30:34 GMT -5
Dan, this wasn't your best work, but I still can't fault it at all. It's well written and effective, getting Nightmare over as this unfeeling monster. This is intriguing stuff, and I'm eager to see him in competition. Yeah, I was kind of pushing 2:30ish AM, and I was extremely tired so I just kind of put the ommentary in and said screw it. I think it isn't that great, but the point is gotten across. Sorry Haz... Hey, it wasn't your best work, but it was still a fun read. Sign of a great writer, that  |
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Post by DarkSabre on Jun 27, 2010 19:34:34 GMT -5
I just have to ask. Now that I've disposed of Legion's (or New Legion's) Hutton Brown Solution, are you scared? ;D
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There's a lot going on, but successfully so. The new Legion got themselves over as a slick, well oiled, fucking BRUTAL machine.
